voila pour mon cours d'anglais on devait faire une lettre de motivation pour décrocher un poste en tant que courtier en banque. donc voila c'était pour savoir si je n'ai pas trop de fautes, merci d'avance

Object: application at the post of broker in bank



Mister, madam,


I am a holder of a BTS savings and finances, further to your announce on the Internet site EfinancialCareers.be, I contact you to offer my application à this broker's post there in.


The profession of broker in bank interests me strongly because I would like to develop strategic long-term relations, and to manage from day to day the relation with the key decision-makers in the platinum member companies


My trump cards are my motivation, my capacity to work in team and my sense of the organization. To integrate your company would represent for me an opportunity which I would know how to seize.


I remain at your disposal for any additional information, notably for an allowing interview of enlighten my candidacy.




Yours faithfully.