Besoin d'aide en anglais svp!!! [Résolu/Fermé]

Salut!
T'as pas de cours?
Tu sais pas comment on fait pour presenter un document?

C'est pas tres compliqué tu sais: Tu décris la nature du document (image, texte), sa provenance, par qui il a été réalisé...

Tu organises ta reponse avec: First, then, finally

Utilise aussi: nevertheless(néanmoins), however (toutefois), despite (malgré)...

Ton point de vue: as far as I'm concerned...
In my opinion...
After studying the document I feel as if...
At first glance/ first sight...
What strikes me... (ce qui m'a choqué)...

Si tu veux autre chose, je peux peut etre t'aider... :)

Bonjour, j'ai besoin aidee veuillez me corriger ce texte vp


The best job for me it is to be a doctor because it is really fascinating .All which takes place in the human body always interested me. We learn many things on the diseases and how to look after them.When we think that thanks to the medicine of people are still alive.The fact of being able to return people to the life it is magnificent for me. This job pays well.In this job we are in touch with people and also in their listening.I like helping the others.The Medicine is changing all the time.I don’t like the job Butcher charcutier because I feel awful to kill animals,I can not see them suffered.
This job not pay a lot of money.The smell of meat is unbearable.It takes a lot of strength and we must use dangerous machinery.We must get up very .

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Bonjour Flavao,
Es-ce je suis trop tard, j'ai fait ce que j'ai pu

The most interesting job for me is to be a doctor because helping other people is a vocation. The function of the human body has always interested me. One learns many things, example: disceases and how to cure them. Thanks to medicine people live longer. Medicine is evoluing all the time. It is a job that pays well, with long hours and many years of study. Being in touch with people and listening to them is very important.

I wouldn't like to be a butcher, the idea of killing animals and seeing them suffer is terrible. This job does not pay well and you must start the day very early. The smell of meat is unbearable, you need a lot of strength to cut the meat and you must use dangerous machinery.

Bonjour,
qui veux m'aider pour un devoir en anglais please il faut qui n'ai aucune faute

The best job for me it is to be a doctor because it is really fascinating .All which takes place in the human body always interested me. We learn many things on the diseases and how to look after them.When we think that thanks to the medicine of people are still alive.The fact of being able to return people to the life it is magnificent for me. This job pays well.In this job we are in touch with people and also in their listening.I like helping the others.The Medicine is changing all the time.I don’t like the job Butcher charcutier because I feel awful to kill animals,I can not see them suffered.
This job not pay a lot of money.The smell of meat is unbearable.It takes a lot of strength and we must use dangerous machinery.We must get up very .